This deck also has a huge issue with control, where in addition to your removal, cards like Bone Picker are basically blanks, and Im not sure this comes close to solving that
Action cards of the Steel Ink type also have strong effects, dealing damage in copious amounts, so players will want to form a strategy that can combine Glimmers with Actions in their turn to really hurt their opponent
The latter two leave your opponents with creatures, and that can backfire, but the risk is worth the reward since these often buy time to find an additional removal spell
I also expected more casual interest than we ended up seeing
We don't manufacture hype
It pretty much precludes you from playing any land that doesnt tap for white or black mana, though