So, it was again revised and released later in the year as Summer Magic. However, that edition also had errorsthe main one being the Hurricane card, printed with a blue border instead of a green one
Theres also Yarok, the Desecrated as a trigger doubler, and youre in the right colors for other lands-matter cards like Teval, the Balanced Scale and The Gitrog Monster
Entomb might be a "band-aid" to the Dimir problem, but right now it's one of the cards propping it up over the more traditional and "fairer" tempo-builds of Dimir
Also, Im pretty sure hes based on Goyas Saturn
The other issue is that they require creatures to get the most from them and while you may well pack some creatures in your list you will not have a high enough density of them to be pumping and fighting with them in an efficient way
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